阅读下面的材料,根据要求写作。
Read the following material and write according to the requirements.
天下虽安,忘战必危。
Although the world is peaceful, forgetting to fight will lead to danger.
——司马穰苴《司马法》
——Sima Rangju's "Sima Law"
中国军队越强大,制约战争的力量就会越壮大,世界和平与发展就会越有保障。
The stronger the Chinese military, the stronger the force that constrains war, and the more secure world peace and development will be.
——国防部部长董军(2025年第十二届北京香山论坛)
——Dong Jun, Minister of National Defense (12th Beijing Xiangshan Forum in 2025)
根据以上材料,立足古今治军思想,谈谈你对维护和平之道的思考,请写一篇文章。
Based on the above materials and ancient and modern military governance ideas, please write an article discussing your thoughts on the ways to maintain peace.
要求:选准角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题;不要套作,不得抄袭;不得泄露个人信息;不少于800字。
Requirements: Choose the right angle, determine the intention, clarify the style, and draft the title on your own; Do not copy or plagiarize; Do not disclose personal information; Not less than 800 words.
【文题解析】:一、材料核心解读
Title Analysis: 1. Core Interpretation of the Material
本次作文由古今两句治军、和平箴言构成,形成传统智慧与当代国防理念的呼应互补,核心探讨强军与和平的辩证关系,主题聚焦 “维护和平的根本之道”。
This essay consists of two ancient and modern sayings on military governance and peace, forming a complementary response between traditional wisdom and contemporary national defense concepts. The core explores the dialectical relationship between a strong military and peace, with a focus on the fundamental way to maintain peace.
第一则:古训《司马法》“天下虽安,忘战必危”
The first one: The ancient saying "Sima Fa" states, "Although the world is safe, forgetting war will lead to danger
1. 核心内涵:和平不是永久常态,安逸松弛、疏于战备是危机的根源。安定的环境下,若摒弃忧患意识、荒废国防军备,必然滋生战乱隐患。
1. Core connotation: Peace is not a permanent norm, and ease, relaxation, and lack of preparedness are the root causes of crises. In a stable environment, if we abandon the sense of crisis and neglect national defense and military equipment, it will inevitably breed hidden dangers of war.
2. 思想内核:居安思危、以战止危的传统治军智慧。古人的 “备战”,好战,而是警惕和平假象,以常备不懈规避战争风险,是被动守安、防患未然的和平思维。
2. Ideological core: the traditional military wisdom of being prepared for danger in times of peace and using war to stop danger. The ancient concept of "preparing for war" was not about being aggressive, but about being vigilant against the illusion of peace and constantly avoiding the risk of war. It was a passive and proactive approach to peace.
第二则:今言国防部部长董军发言
Second article: Today's speech by Dong Jun, Minister of National Defense
1. 核心内涵:国家军力的强大,是制约战争、守护世界和平的核心力量,军力越强,和平底气越足、发展环境越稳。
1. Core connotation: The strong military power of a country is the core force that constrains war and safeguards world peace. The stronger the military power, the stronger the peace confidence and the more stable the development environment.
2. 思想内核:强军护和平、实力守安宁的当代国防理念。新时代的强军,不争霸、不黩武,而是以硬核实力形成战略威慑,主动遏制战争、守护中外和平,是主动维和、实力安邦的大国思维。
2. Ideological core: The contemporary national defense concept of strengthening the military to protect peace and maintaining stability with strength. The strong military of the new era does not seek hegemony or militarism, but forms strategic deterrence through hard nuclear power, actively containing war and safeguarding peace between China and foreign countries. This is the thinking of a great power that actively maintains peace and ensures its strength.
两则材料辩证关系
Dialectical relationship between two materials
二者一脉相承、层层递进,无对立冲突:
The two are continuous and progressive, without any opposition or conflict:
1. 共性:均否定 “和平无需备战” 的错误认知,认定备战、强军是和平的前提与保障;
1. Commonality: Both reject the misconception that "peace does not require preparation for war" and believe that preparation for war and a strong military are prerequisites and guarantees for peace;
2. 递进:古训侧重戒骄戒怠、居安思危,解决 “和平年代为何不能忘战” 的问题;今言侧重实力为基、强军维和,解决 “如何守护长久和平” 的问题;
2. Progression: Ancient teachings emphasize the importance of avoiding arrogance and neglect, being prepared for danger in times of peace, and addressing the question of "why war cannot be forgotten in times of peace"; Today's speech focuses on strength as the foundation, strong military and peacekeeping, and solving the problem of "how to safeguard long-term peace";
3. 核心逻辑:不忘战、能备战、善强军,方得真和平。
3. Core logic: Only by not forgetting to fight, being able to prepare for war, and being good at building a strong military, can true peace be achieved.
二、核心立意提炼(分梯度,适配不同写作层次)
2、 Core concept refinement (graded, adapted to different levels of writing)
基础立意(稳妥保底,不易偏题)
Basic concept (steady and guaranteed, not easy to deviate from the topic)
1. 居安思危,常备不懈,以国防之固守和平之安
1. Be prepared for danger in times of peace, be constantly prepared, and safeguard peace through national defense
2. 强军方止战,实力护和平
2. A strong military can stop the war and protect peace with its strength
3. 不忘战危之戒,筑牢和平根基
3. Never forget the warning of war danger and build a solid foundation for peace
进阶立意(辩证深刻,贴合题意核心)
Advanced concept (dialectically profound, in line with the core of the question)
1. 备战非好战,强军为维和:古今治军智慧皆以止战安民为核心,战备是和平的底线,强军是和平的底气。
1. Preparing for war is not about fighting, and building a strong army is about maintaining peace: The wisdom of military management throughout history is centered around stopping wars and ensuring the safety of the people. Preparedness is the bottom line of peace, and building a strong army is the foundation of peace.
2. 以忧患之心守盛世,以强军之力护长治:常怀忘战必危的警醒,兼具强军护国的实力,方得长久和平。
2. Defend the prosperous era with a sense of crisis, and protect stability with the strength of a strong army: Always be vigilant of the dangers of war, and possess the strength of a strong army to protect the country, in order to achieve long-term peace.
3. 传承古之安战智慧,践行今之强军维和之道,解锁新时代和平密码。
3. Inherit the wisdom of ancient warfare, practice the path of strong military and peacekeeping today, and unlock the password for peace in the new era.
拔高立意(格局宏大,贴合时代语境)
Upholding the concept (grand scale, in line with the context of the times)
1. 执居安思危之戒,秉强军护国之能,以中国军力之强筑牢世界和平之基。
1. Adhere to the principle of being prepared for danger in times of peace, uphold the ability of a strong military to protect the country, and build a solid foundation for world peace with the strength of China's military power.
2. 忘战则危、能战方和:古今治军一脉相承,实力制衡才是永续和平的终极之道。
2. Forgetting war leads to danger, while being able to fight leads to harmony: Military governance has been passed down from ancient to modern times, and balancing power is the ultimate way to achieve sustainable peace.
三、写作避坑提醒
3、 Writing Avoiding Pits Reminder
1. 不可割裂材料:只写居安思危、只谈强军强国,均为偏题,必须结合古今双重内涵,辩证联动备战与和平;
1. Materials that cannot be separated: Only writing about being prepared for danger in times of peace and only talking about building a strong military and a strong country are off topic topics that must be combined with the dual connotations of ancient and modern times, dialectically linking war preparation and peace;
2. 不可曲解主旨:严禁将 “备战、强军” 等同于崇尚战争,核心是以战止战、以备止危、以强护和;
2. The main idea cannot be misinterpreted: It is strictly prohibited to equate "preparing for war and building a strong military" with advocating war. The core is to stop war with war, prevent danger with preparedness, and protect peace with strength;
3. 紧扣核心话题:全程围绕“维护和平之道”展开,所有论述落脚于如何守护和平。
3. Focus on the core topic: The entire discussion revolves around the "way to maintain peace", with all arguments focusing on how to safeguard peace.
四、核心写作逻辑框架
4、 Core Writing Logical Framework
开篇:结合古今名言,提出中心论点 ——真正的和平,从不是妥协退让的安逸,而是居安思危的警醒、硬核强军的守护。 分论点 1:古训昭昭,忘战必危,忧患意识是和平的第一道防线(解读传统治军智慧)。 分论点 2:今时可见,强军维和,硬核实力是和平的最坚实底气(解读当代国防理念)。 分论点 3:古今贯通,备战不黩武、强军不称霸,方为新时代和平正道(辩证升华,联系大国担当)。 结尾:立足当下,青年当传承治军智慧,心怀忧患、笃行奋进,守护盛世和平。
Opening: Combining ancient and modern sayings, the central argument is put forward - true peace is never the comfort of compromise and concession, but the vigilance of being prepared for danger in times of peace and the protection of a strong nuclear army. Sub argument 1: As ancient teachings have shown, forgetting war is dangerous, and a sense of crisis is the first line of defense for peace (interpreting traditional military wisdom). Sub argument 2: It can be seen today that strong military peacekeeping and nuclear power are the most solid foundation for peace (interpreting contemporary national defense concepts). Sub argument 3: Connecting ancient and modern times, preparing for war without resorting to violence, strengthening the military without seeking hegemony, is the correct path for peace in the new era (dialectical sublimation, connecting with major powers to take responsibility). Conclusion: Based on the present, young people should inherit the wisdom of military governance, bear hardships in mind, strive forward with diligence, and safeguard the peace of the prosperous era.
【学生佳作赏析】:备战以止戈,强军以护和
[Appreciation of Student Masterpieces]: Preparing for War to Stop the War, Strengthening the Army to Protect Peace
《司马法》有云:“天下虽安,忘战必危。”这句穿越千年的治军古训,凝练了中华民族最深沉的安危智慧:和平从不是天赐的馈赠,而是常备不懈、未雨绸缪的结果。时至今日,国防部部长董军的论断赋予这一古训全新的时代内涵:中国军队的强大,从来不是战争的号角,而是和平的屏障。古今治军思想一脉相承、辩证统一,昭示着亘古不变的真理:真正的和平从非苟且偷安的无为,而是备战止戈、强军护和的有为,这便是守护和平的核心之道。
The Sima Law states: "Although the world is peaceful, forgetting war will inevitably lead to danger." This ancient military training, which has been passed down for thousands of years, condenses the deepest wisdom of the Chinese nation on safety: peace is never a gift from heaven, but the result of constant preparation and preparation for the future. To this day, the statement of Defense Minister Dong Jun endows this ancient proverb with a new contemporary connotation: the strength of the Chinese military has never been a horn of war, but a barrier to peace. The ancient and modern military governance ideas are inherited and dialectically unified, indicating an eternal truth: true peace is not achieved through inaction, but through active preparation for war, strengthening the military, and protecting peace. This is the core way to safeguard peace.
居安思危、常备不懈,是古人恪守的和平底线,是穿越千年的治国安邦智慧。春秋战国战乱频仍,先贤在战火硝烟中洞悉兴衰规律,留下“国虽大,好战必亡;天下虽安,忘战必危”的深刻箴言。古人早已看清战争与和平的辩证关系:穷兵黩武、嗜战好攻,终将耗尽国力、倾覆社稷,吴王夫差穷兵黩武终致亡国便是前车之鉴;而承平之日松弛武备、沉溺安逸,同样会让国家陷入无防之危,徐偃王废武弛备最终覆灭亦是历史教训。
Being prepared for danger in times of peace and being constantly prepared is the bottom line of peace that ancient people adhered to, and it is the wisdom of governing and safeguarding the country that has lasted for thousands of years. During the Spring and Autumn period and the Warring States period, there were frequent wars and conflicts. The wise sages were able to discern the laws of rise and fall amidst the smoke of war and gunpowder, leaving behind profound sayings such as "Although a country is large, it will perish if it fights; although the world is safe, forgetting war will lead to danger". The ancient people had already seen the dialectical relationship between war and peace clearly: the use of military force and a love for war and aggression will eventually exhaust national strength and overthrow the country. The example of King Fuchai of Wu, who used military force to lead to the downfall of the country, is a warning; On the day of peace, relaxing military preparations and indulging in comfort will also lead the country into an unguarded danger. The ultimate downfall of King Xu Yan's military relaxation is also a historical lesson.
中华民族历来尚和不好战,历代明君贤臣皆深谙“慎战”与“备战”的平衡之道。太平盛世不废军武,安宁岁月不除戒备,并非渴求战争、热衷征伐,而是以充足战备筑牢国家安全根基,以敬畏之心规避战乱风险。这种治军思想,摒弃了狭隘的武力至上,彰显了“以武止武、以卫求和”的东方智慧,成为古代中国长治久安、维系天下安定的重要根基,也为后世守护和平提供了根本遵循。
The Chinese nation has always been peaceful and not warlike. Throughout history, the wise rulers and officials of the Ming dynasty have been well versed in the balance between "cautious warfare" and "preparedness for war". In times of peace and prosperity, the military will not be abolished, and in times of peace, vigilance will not be removed. It is not a thirst for war or enthusiasm for conquest, but a solid foundation of national security with sufficient combat readiness, and a sense of awe to avoid the risks of war. This military governance ideology abandons the narrow supremacy of force and embodies the Eastern wisdom of "using force to stop violence and seeking peace through defense". It has become an important foundation for the long-term stability of ancient China and the maintenance of national stability, and has also provided fundamental guidance for future generations to safeguard peace.
强军固本、以强维和,是当代传承古训、适配时代的和平正道。百年近代史,是一部国力孱弱、武备废弛导致山河破碎、生灵涂炭的屈辱史。晚清国力衰微、军备松弛,面对列强坚船利炮毫无招架之力,千年古国陷入百年战乱动荡,深刻印证了“忘战必危”的沉痛教训。历史反复证明,没有强大的国防作为支撑,所有的和平愿景都是空中楼阁;没有过硬的军队作为屏障,安宁盛世便不堪一击。
Strengthening the military and maintaining peace through strengthening the foundation are the peaceful path that inherits ancient teachings and adapts to the times in contemporary times. The hundred year modern history is a humiliating history of weak national strength, weakened military preparedness leading to the fragmentation of mountains and rivers, and the suffering of people and spirits. The decline of national strength and the relaxation of military equipment in the late Qing Dynasty left the ancient country defenseless against the strong ships and cannons of foreign powers, and plunged into a hundred years of war and turmoil. This deeply confirms the painful lesson of "forgetting war is dangerous". History has repeatedly proven that without strong national defense as a support, all visions of peace are castles in the air; Without a strong army as a barrier, a peaceful and prosperous era would be vulnerable.
今日中国的强军之路,正是对古代治军智慧的创造性传承与创新性发展。中国军队的发展壮大,始终坚守和平初心,不走霸权扩张、穷兵黩武的老路,始终秉持防御性国防政策。正如董军部长所言,中国军力的提升,壮大的是制约战争、遏制冲突的正义力量,而非挑起争端、制造对立的破坏力量。从戍守边疆、捍卫国土主权,到参与国际维和、护航远洋航道,再到助力全球安全治理,强大的中国军队始终是世界和平的守护者、稳定器,用硬核实力抵御战乱风险,用责任担当守护寰宇安宁。
The path of building a strong military in China today is a creative inheritance and innovative development of ancient military wisdom. The development and growth of the Chinese military have always adhered to the original intention of peace, avoiding the old path of hegemonic expansion and military aggression, and always upholding a defensive national defense policy. As Minister Dong Jun said, the enhancement of China's military power strengthens the just forces that constrain war and contain conflicts, rather than the destructive forces that provoke disputes and create opposition. From guarding borders and defending national sovereignty, to participating in international peacekeeping and escorting ocean routes, to assisting in global security governance, the powerful Chinese military has always been the guardian and stabilizer of world peace, using its hard core strength to resist the risks of war and taking responsibility to safeguard global peace.
备战与维和、强军与安世,从来都是相辅相成、辩证统一的整体。古人“忘战必危”的警醒,告诫我们和平永远需要实力兜底,安逸松弛终将招致祸患;当代强军兴军的实践,证明了强大武力是遏制战争、守护和平的最可靠保障。慎战方能止战,能战方能言和,这是古今相通的安全逻辑,也是颠扑不破的时代真理。
Preparing for war and maintaining peace, strengthening the military and ensuring security have always been complementary and dialectically unified as a whole. The ancient warning of 'forgetting war will lead to danger' warns us that peace always requires strength as a backup, and comfort and relaxation will eventually lead to disaster; The practice of building a strong military in contemporary times has proven that powerful force is the most reliable guarantee for containing war and safeguarding peace. Only with caution can we stop the war, and only with the ability to fight can we make peace. This is a security logic that has been passed down from ancient to modern times, and it is also an undeniable truth of the times.
身处风云变幻的当下,世界百年变局加速演进,局部冲突此起彼伏,安全风险层出不穷,绝对的和平从未真正降临。我们传承古今治军智慧,既要坚守中华民族爱好和平的初心,摒弃好战扩张的狭隘思维;更要常怀忧患意识、砥砺强军之志,持续筑牢国防根基、锤炼过硬战力。以常备不懈规避危局,以强军实力守护和平,让古老的止戈智慧焕发时代光芒,以中国强军之姿,护华夏盛世安宁,守世界长治久安。
Amidst the ever-changing times, the world's century long changes are accelerating, with local conflicts emerging one after another and security risks constantly emerging. Absolute peace has never truly arrived. We inherit the wisdom of military governance from ancient to modern times, while adhering to the original aspiration of the Chinese nation to love peace and abandoning the narrow thinking of bellicose expansion; We must always have a sense of crisis and strive to build a strong military, continuously strengthen the foundation of national defense, and hone our formidable combat capabilities. To be constantly prepared to avoid danger, to safeguard peace with strong military strength, to let the ancient wisdom of stopping wars shine with the light of the times, and to safeguard the peace of China's prosperous era and the long-term stability of the world with the posture of a strong Chinese military.